Responding To Crit

I was told in crit that my model looked too 'different' to the other characters, it was too high poly and the textures didn't seem to fit in with the rest of the characters. I was taken back by this news, considering that was the point of our animation. they're all our original designs and original animations.

I changed the 'Blinn' texture to 'Lambert' to make it less shiny, I also took off my normal's and added a black outline to make it look more like a cartoon. It doesn't look terrible but it's not as nice as the original. 

I also decided to go a bit more intense with colours, with toons. Very flat textures with slight lighting. But again, It's not good enough.